first recorded track - opinions needed etc

[noden1230]

hi all,

just wondered whether you could give us some feedback on my attempt at writing and recording my own material,

its a pretty rough version with the singing not finished as you will here,
but thought i'd see what ya think anyways


www.myspace.com/viracocha-uk

also im not very good with genres.....so if you could tell me what genre this comes under id appreciate it

cheers

 

[noden1230]

come on guys