Hey, new song by me :) WANT TIPS!! Wcar,Tdwp,AA....

[sockerbeat]

Hey dudes!

I have worked on this song for some days and this where I am now!
Listen and rate and give tips to evolve the sound for me ^^

The screams and cleans are made by me not master at screaming yet but...
Also all the other instruments are made by me, my own project ^^

Guitars: Pod Farm 2 (No add ons)
Bass: Pod Farm 2
Drums: Addictive drums/Steven Slate
and some other things
Some mastering done but give me tips to evolve it

don't know what to call the style of the song maybe something: we came as romans/The devil wears prada/Asking Alexandria/Breakdown of Sanity ;d

Give all constructive critic you can

LINK: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15946984/Hedlund - Hawaii done 30 mars.mp3

named the song Hawaii haha, only for fun ^^

Give your advises and help me evolve the song and mix!
Peace! ​

 

[sockerbeat]

Please give comments!

 

[Tommy Evans]

I'm having a hard time feeling the kick. All I can hear from it is the high end of it. Bass is not defined enough so it's also hard to feel it even accept that it's there.

 

[foundations]

i would use some completely different drum samples, and then work on your guitar tone.. maybe look around on youtube for some pod farm tone videos? thers plenty of joey sturgis style patches? you may need to buy the metal shop expansion though.. then post another mix when youve got those 2 aspects improved and see how you can work on the rest