I NEED A LITTLE HELP WRITING MY EROTICA

LORD_RED_DRAGON

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Lori knew that Christianity was a cult, but this in and of itself was not the reason that she didn’t go with her parents when they went to the only church in town. The reason that she didn’t go to church was because it was boring, and sinning was so much more fun. She was having sex with a boy named Richard every time her parents went to church, every Sunday morning and every Wednesday night for the last 6 months, but this Sunday was different; Richard was out of town for the weekend, fishing or hunting or something. Lori didn’t remember exactly where he was because it didn’t seem important at the moment. She had something more important on her mind, her sexuality. She’d started sleeping with boys when she was 14, but that had been a whole 2 years ago, and despite her parents’ homophobia, she was finally admitting to herself that she was a lesbian, and had been a lesbian long before puberty. She knew she was different than other people that first day of kindergarten. She hadn’t been able to admit her lesbianism to even herself, let alone anyone else, because her parents’ intense homophobia was something that was representative of the redneck hick population of the all-white Texas town. The whole town was so severely homophobic that she would have had to go all the way to Dallas County, perhaps even the city of Dallas itself, in order to find another lesbian willing to have any kind of sex with her. There were lots of lesbians in the town, but this was one of those hyper-homophobic towns where promiscuity, even nymphomania, was no big deal, as long as it was hetero. The lesbians were the loose, sluttish girls. They thought that lesbianism was a disease and that “getting dick” every day was the cure. It was so very easy for her to tell which girls checked each other out in gym class, and she could tell which girls made themselves look sexy for the benefit of other lesbians instead of guys. Lori also knew that none of the high school lesbians would ever do anything beyond just looking at each other in the showers after sports. There were slightly more female athletes than males at the Christianized town’s only high school, and almost all of them were closeted lesbians, but Lori knew with absolute certainty that none of them would do anything at all sexual with another female until they got out of this homophobic town. Lori had only just turned 16 and she knew she couldn’t wait till her 17th birthday to taste pussy. She thought about kissing a girl every time she kissed a guy, she wanted to grope soft gooey boobs every time she pressed her hands up against a male athlete’s unyieldingly hard muscled chest, she wanted to taste another woman’s pussy juice every time she tasted a guy’s cum. She couldn’t lie to herself any more, she couldn’t keep telling herself that “it was just a phase” that she’d just “grow out of”, she had a several friends that lived in Dallas County, friends that she visited every single Saturday, and sitting there on her bed, on a Sunday morning, she firmly decided that she was definitely going to have sex with another female the very next time she went there. By the time Saturday came, she was noticeably giddy with the anticipation of seeing her “big city” friends. Her friend Jessica drove up to Lori’s house just a little after sunrise, just the same as every week before, and despite Lori being a little jumpy and jittery, her parents still let her go, not realizing just how much Lori’s life was about to change. Jessica was driving a glossy black indestructible gas guzzler convertible, Lori was in the front passenger seat, and although Lori and Jessie never smoked weed, the 2 girls in the back seat were just a little bit too stoned to drive, again just the same as every week before. Once they’d gotten around the corner, Lori couldn’t hold it in any longer, “I’m a lesbian” she squealed, triggering laughter from the others. “What?” Lori asked, genuinely confused. The laughing stopped. “What’s so funny?” Lori asked with a tone so serious that Jessie actually slowed down the car. “Honey, Baby, we’ve known you were a dyke from day one” the 2 girls in the huge back seat started giggling again as Jessie sped up to their previous speed. Lori was speechless, dazzled that her own lesbianism was as transparent as it was for the other “closeted” lesbians. “The whole reason we even hang out with you is because you’re the only dyke that will hang out with us breeders,” she said, laughing again. Although they were not actually related to each other, the 2 freakishly pale blue-eyed girls in the back would have looked like identical twins except that one kept the natural blonde hair color they’d both been born with, and the other had dyed her hair blue “to match my eyes” she’d said. It was the blue haired girl that spoke next. “So what’s it like to eat pussy? To me it’d be all gross” she said only a half a second after the black haired Jessie had finished saying the word “breeders” “You’d suck every dick on planet Earth, if you could” the blonde responded before Lori could answer the question. “I’ve never actually slept with a girl before” Lori said so hesitantly that it made the “twins” giggle again. “What? Never? Why not?” Jessie asked. “You saving yourself for that special someone?” the blue-haired girl teased before the blonde elbowed her. “No, it’s just the town, you know? There’d be a lynching if anybody had any kind of lesbian sex there. My parents would kill me if they knew.” “What they don’t know won’t kill them” the blonde spoke up, the first words she’d said the whole ride. “What you a lezzy now too?” the blue haired girl joked. “No, not me, Shorty” “umm who’s Shorty?” Lori asked. It was the blue haired girl that answered “Shorty is bi and she hasn’t fucked any girls in a week”
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Shorty was a total nymphomaniac, and her name was a sexual reference. She was called Short-y because she was short-er than most of the people she had sex with. Shorty wasn’t really all that short; she just kind of had a thing for tall people. She was really only just a little bit shorter than Lori, who’d been somehow expecting this “Shorty” girl to be a midget. Lori looked at Shorty’s pornographic clock. It had only been 2 hours since she’d left her parents’ house and now she was looking at topless woman whose cotton-candy-pink hair perfectly matched the color of her pointed nipples. Shorty’s boobs were bigger than Lori’s double-Ds, a lot bigger. They didn’t really sag and droop nearly as much as Lori expected, but they hung down just enough that Lori knew there was no way in hell Shorty’s boobs had a single drop of silicone in them. Shorty pushed Lori’s naked body onto the black rubber sheet covering the square bed.

It is at this point that I, the author, being male, feel it is necessary to consult an actual lesbian/bi girl/another erotica writer in order to make this lesbian-sex-scene look good.
 
what you need is somebody to write you a good epitaph before the rest of this forum hunts you down and squeezes your head until your eyeballs pop out