I'm writing a story... - Page 5

LoveJanne · April 21st, 2008, 08:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Kirst-ehhh

OMFG!
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!
Hahahaha! AWESOME!

it's not gonna be a weird story it's gonna be a good one, one that makes sense.

Quote:

Originally Posted by ch0pzta

This story wins the internet.

cool man

Katie'Force · April 21st, 2008, 08:56 AM

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Originally Posted by LoveJanne

yeah!! but maybe later, ah, who knows....

haha dirty girl

LoveJanne · April 21st, 2008, 09:03 AM

i know

john_lord · April 21st, 2008, 05:59 PM

that's fucking awesome really!!

well you said you wanted constructive criticism, right? a writer must always describe each scene with detail... but you missed a specific detail!!! you should at least refer to Mark's size in some way!!

and i see you've given me a new nickname! JL! that's nice, it's like a rapper's nick, but you could also just call me John or Johnny! nevermind though,whatever you like, JL seems cool!

LoveJanne · April 21st, 2008, 06:14 PM

thanks

you're right :O well i said something might still happen with me and him...maybe THEN i'll mention how big it is! what would you think...big, average, little?
i couldn't think of anything but JL XD if you like, i'll change it

john_lord · April 21st, 2008, 06:43 PM

u can use whatever name u like...

i think it's small, and that's the REAL reason why you turned him down...

LoveJanne · April 21st, 2008, 06:49 PM

yeah, that COULD be a reason XD
and i'll keep it as JL

Kirst-ehhh · April 21st, 2008, 07:04 PM

I like JL

I'm gunna start callilng Katie 'Kables'. Her initials are KB and if any of you have seen The Pick of Destiny (the Tenacious D movie) you'll know that Jack Black (initials JB) gets called Jables.

So yeah. Anyway...I don't know if I should say this on the bands official forum...but I think Mark would be HUNG.

xx Kirsty

LoveJanne · April 21st, 2008, 07:05 PM

i never saw that movie, but ok

what do you mean HUNG?

Kirst-ehhh · April 21st, 2008, 07:15 PM

I mean I think he's hung like a horse XD Haha. His hands are frickin' HUGE. They totally engulf mines!

xx Kirsty

April 21st, 2008, 05:59 PM	#104 (permalink)
john_lord Firewind fan Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece Posts: 223	that's fucking awesome really!! well you said you wanted constructive criticism, right? a writer must always describe each scene with detail... but you missed a specific detail!!! you should at least refer to Mark's size in some way!! and i see you've given me a new nickname! JL! that's nice, it's like a rapper's nick, but you could also just call me John or Johnny! nevermind though,whatever you like, JL seems cool! __________________ Be anything but don't be gone...

April 21st, 2008, 06:43 PM	#106 (permalink)
john_lord Firewind fan Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Greece Posts: 223	u can use whatever name u like... i think it's small, and that's the REAL reason why you turned him down... __________________ Be anything but don't be gone...

April 21st, 2008, 07:04 PM	#108 (permalink)
Kirst-ehhh Forged By Fire Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Glasgow, Scotland Posts: 1,473	I like JL I'm gunna start callilng Katie 'Kables'. Her initials are KB and if any of you have seen The Pick of Destiny (the Tenacious D movie) you'll know that Jack Black (initials JB) gets called Jables. So yeah. Anyway...I don't know if I should say this on the bands official forum...but I think Mark would be HUNG. xx Kirsty

April 21st, 2008, 07:15 PM	#110 (permalink)
Kirst-ehhh Forged By Fire Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Glasgow, Scotland Posts: 1,473	I mean I think he's hung like a horse XD Haha. His hands are frickin' HUGE. They totally engulf mines! xx Kirsty