A remixed, re-recorded Toxic Grind Machine song.(Stems a Raw files inside)

Toxic Grind Machine · January 22nd, 2012, 01:19 PM

Hey fellas!

Here is a re-recorded, remixed version of our number 1 popsong hit "Burn Bright, Wry Jackal".. Any last details you would add, alter or delete?
http://soundcloud.com/robert-...t-wry-jackal-1

This is basically the main mix for our debut album, but details are always welcome!

EDIT: Here are the raw files and stems, mix away fellow Sneapsters: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/546041/TGM%...aw%20Files.rar

Tempo Track: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/546041/Burn%...po%20Track.smt

Toxic Grind Machine · January 22nd, 2012, 01:23 PM

Might be tempted to upload some raw files from this song as well btw, see if you lads like remixing it..

FarBy0ndMetal · January 22nd, 2012, 01:27 PM

Sounds great man, and I would LOVE to practice mixing with this song. Post them raws

Toxic Grind Machine · January 22nd, 2012, 02:10 PM

cool!

btw, here is the same track, same mix but with more EQ on the guitars (making them more prominent):

http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump/b...t-wry-jackal-2

roy22341 · January 22nd, 2012, 06:43 PM

Guitars sound great, but I think I liked the kick and snare from the original recording better - seemed more in your face than these do. Did you re-track vocals too? Or is that the same vocal take?

Morgan C · January 22nd, 2012, 07:06 PM

The guitars are much better than before I think, much easier to hear what's being played. Although I'm just listening on shitty hifi speakers atm. Not digging the drum hit at 3:43 tho, I think a snare hit is needed there.

Deadstar · January 22nd, 2012, 07:29 PM

I love this track! Listening through my akg 702 seems that guitars on the 2nd version are too prominent.. vocals and drums get buried.

Toxic Grind Machine · January 23rd, 2012, 04:06 AM

Awesome, thanks for the feedback so far guys!

- Morgan good point on that hit mang, easy to fix for me and shall give that a try!
- Roy, im sure i'll up the volume of the drums in the final mix a bit.. not going back to superior 1 though

- Deadstar, i think i have to agree with you.. having listened to the tracks on a few different speakers i think the guitars need less presence to give room to Trevor and the drummer.

Cheers!

osum · January 23rd, 2012, 08:37 AM

Dig it! The sound totally fits the style. Especially that kick is cool

JonWormwood · January 23rd, 2012, 01:39 PM

My all time TGM song by far. Seriously.

You should include the stems with the album.

JonWormwood · January 23rd, 2012, 01:44 PM

Why on earth does it say you joined jul 2011?

Revson · January 23rd, 2012, 02:54 PM

Listening to mix 2 now, and it sounds badass. What was the guitar chain you used?

Toxic Grind Machine · January 23rd, 2012, 03:05 PM

Johnwormwood: I had black neon bob as my username since.. 2000 or so? But now it's toxic grind machine, wanted a change

Revson: Cheers my man.. The guitar chain was basically my beloved gibson explorer gothic (it cuts itself) into the POD XT, into the RME fireface without any effects on it post recording.
I did use some EQ to filter out unwanted low and high end offcourse.

zakky · January 23rd, 2012, 03:31 PM

worldwideweapon · January 23rd, 2012, 03:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Toxic Grind Machine

Might be tempted to upload some raw files from this song as well btw, see if you lads like remixing it..

would be super nice to have some raw files and midis from this song! Please do it!

-JR- · January 24th, 2012, 02:05 AM

Agree with Morgan and Deadstar on the mix. This song along with Hymnlock and Amphetamines in Ghost City are easily my favorite TGM songs. Can't wait for the album. Care to share the tracklist yet?

Toxic Grind Machine · January 24th, 2012, 04:10 AM

okay, raw files coming soon! God, i hate the thought of exporting the synths allready.. haha, but i'll throw em in as stems.

JR, tracklist is not set yet.. but im thinking about opening up with Amphetamines in Ghost City, just something about starting a album with a vocoder voice singing "every living creature.. in this world.. dies alone".
Plus it will be a album that flows songs into songs like it's one huge song.. sort of a session album if you will, but with clear seperate tracks.. you'll see!

Toxic Grind Machine · January 24th, 2012, 05:30 AM

Here are the raw files and stems, mix away fellow Sneapsters:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/546041/TGM%2...aw%20Files.rar

Now mind you, all files are raw.. synths are mixed inside the exported stem, i could dissect the synths but that would be about 12 stereo tracks of exporting.. no time!
Also, MIDI drums are GM mapped.. let me know if that works or not.. If not, i'll export and create my own drummap.

Toxic Grind Machine · January 24th, 2012, 08:46 AM

Okay, can someone give the download a try and let me know if it works? I have it working on my PCs, but some others may have problems with it.

Let me know!

osum · January 24th, 2012, 08:48 AM

works!

Toxic Grind Machine · January 24th, 2012, 08:50 AM

Cheers Osum!

ttrentt · January 24th, 2012, 05:21 PM

As somebody who grew up listeing to Front 242, Front Line Assembly, KMFDM, Delerium, Noise Unit, I have an incredible passion for guitar based industrial (even thought Front 242 isn't), it is my favorite genre of music. I am totally stoked you give us the stems for this. I am getting back into writing industrial music an TGM is something to look up too. Amazing. This shit is amazing.

Kenny Lee · January 25th, 2012, 12:33 AM

Here Bro!! Sorry I couldn't get your drum midi files to work. It kept loading a 15 miunte long midi file flying at like 280bpm hahahaa.

I love this kinda stuff. I just heard your original tune just now, maybe I shoulda turned up the synths hey?

http://metalmusicians.net/toxicgrindmachine/tgm.mp3

Splat88 · January 25th, 2012, 01:37 AM

Here's my mix. Enjoy!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/868701/Sneap...t%20Master.mp3

sinquestsound · January 25th, 2012, 02:53 AM

Hi,

http://soundcloud.com/sinmixbrickwall/burn-bright-wry-jackal-by
Stay Metall,

January 22nd, 2012, 01:19 PM	#1 (permalink)
Toxic Grind Machine black neon bob Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 258	A remixed, re-recorded Toxic Grind Machine song.(Stems a Raw files inside) Hey fellas! Here is a re-recorded, remixed version of our number 1 popsong hit "Burn Bright, Wry Jackal".. Any last details you would add, alter or delete? http://soundcloud.com/robert-...t-wry-jackal-1 This is basically the main mix for our debut album, but details are always welcome! EDIT: Here are the raw files and stems, mix away fellow Sneapsters: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/546041/TGM%...aw%20Files.rar Tempo Track: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/546041/Burn%...po%20Track.smt __________________ http://www.facebook.com/#!/ToxicGrindMachine http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/toxicgrindmachine2 Last edited by Toxic Grind Machine : July 18th, 2012 at 09:40 AM.

January 22nd, 2012, 01:23 PM	#2 (permalink)
Toxic Grind Machine black neon bob Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 258	Might be tempted to upload some raw files from this song as well btw, see if you lads like remixing it.. __________________ http://www.facebook.com/#!/ToxicGrindMachine http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/toxicgrindmachine2

January 22nd, 2012, 02:10 PM	#4 (permalink)
Toxic Grind Machine black neon bob Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 258	cool! btw, here is the same track, same mix but with more EQ on the guitars (making them more prominent): http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump/b...t-wry-jackal-2 __________________ http://www.facebook.com/#!/ToxicGrindMachine http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/toxicgrindmachine2

January 22nd, 2012, 07:06 PM	#6 (permalink)
Morgan C MAX LOUD PRESETS¯\(°_o)/¯ Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 3,670	The guitars are much better than before I think, much easier to hear what's being played. Although I'm just listening on shitty hifi speakers atm. Not digging the drum hit at 3:43 tho, I think a snare hit is needed there. __________________

January 23rd, 2012, 04:06 AM	#8 (permalink)
Toxic Grind Machine black neon bob Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 258	Awesome, thanks for the feedback so far guys! - Morgan good point on that hit mang, easy to fix for me and shall give that a try! - Roy, im sure i'll up the volume of the drums in the final mix a bit.. not going back to superior 1 though - Deadstar, i think i have to agree with you.. having listened to the tracks on a few different speakers i think the guitars need less presence to give room to Trevor and the drummer. Cheers! __________________ http://www.facebook.com/#!/ToxicGrindMachine http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/toxicgrindmachine2

January 22nd, 2012, 01:27 PM	#3 (permalink)
FarBy0ndMetal AKA Mr BeerBaby Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Los Angeles, CA Posts: 575	Sounds great man, and I would LOVE to practice mixing with this song. Post them raws

January 22nd, 2012, 06:43 PM	#5 (permalink)
roy22341 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Lafayette, LA Posts: 778	Guitars sound great, but I think I liked the kick and snare from the original recording better - seemed more in your face than these do. Did you re-track vocals too? Or is that the same vocal take?

January 22nd, 2012, 07:29 PM	#7 (permalink)
Deadstar Google Bordello Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: London, UK Posts: 668	I love this track! Listening through my akg 702 seems that guitars on the 2nd version are too prominent.. vocals and drums get buried.

January 23rd, 2012, 08:37 AM	#9 (permalink)
osum Misanthrope Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: South Germany Posts: 381	Dig it! The sound totally fits the style. Especially that kick is cool __________________ social shit: soundcloud \| twitter \| facebook

January 23rd, 2012, 01:39 PM	#10 (permalink)
JonWormwood Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Jax, Fl Posts: 3,622	My all time TGM song by far. Seriously. You should include the stems with the album. __________________ http://wormwoodprophecy.bandcamp.com/

January 23rd, 2012, 01:44 PM	#11 (permalink)
JonWormwood Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Jax, Fl Posts: 3,622	Why on earth does it say you joined jul 2011? __________________ http://wormwoodprophecy.bandcamp.com/

January 23rd, 2012, 02:54 PM	#12 (permalink)
Revson Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Orlando, FL Posts: 522	Listening to mix 2 now, and it sounds badass. What was the guitar chain you used?

January 23rd, 2012, 03:05 PM	#13 (permalink)
Toxic Grind Machine black neon bob Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 258	Johnwormwood: I had black neon bob as my username since.. 2000 or so? But now it's toxic grind machine, wanted a change Revson: Cheers my man.. The guitar chain was basically my beloved gibson explorer gothic (it cuts itself) into the POD XT, into the RME fireface without any effects on it post recording. I did use some EQ to filter out unwanted low and high end offcourse. __________________ http://www.facebook.com/#!/ToxicGrindMachine http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/toxicgrindmachine2

January 23rd, 2012, 03:31 PM	#14 (permalink)
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January 24th, 2012, 02:05 AM	#16 (permalink)
-JR- Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 23	Agree with Morgan and Deadstar on the mix. This song along with Hymnlock and Amphetamines in Ghost City are easily my favorite TGM songs. Can't wait for the album. Care to share the tracklist yet?

January 24th, 2012, 04:10 AM	#17 (permalink)
Toxic Grind Machine black neon bob Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 258	okay, raw files coming soon! God, i hate the thought of exporting the synths allready.. haha, but i'll throw em in as stems. JR, tracklist is not set yet.. but im thinking about opening up with Amphetamines in Ghost City, just something about starting a album with a vocoder voice singing "every living creature.. in this world.. dies alone". Plus it will be a album that flows songs into songs like it's one huge song.. sort of a session album if you will, but with clear seperate tracks.. you'll see! __________________ http://www.facebook.com/#!/ToxicGrindMachine http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/toxicgrindmachine2

January 24th, 2012, 05:30 AM	#18 (permalink)
Toxic Grind Machine black neon bob Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 258	Here are the raw files and stems, mix away fellow Sneapsters: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/546041/TGM%2...aw%20Files.rar Now mind you, all files are raw.. synths are mixed inside the exported stem, i could dissect the synths but that would be about 12 stereo tracks of exporting.. no time! Also, MIDI drums are GM mapped.. let me know if that works or not.. If not, i'll export and create my own drummap. __________________ http://www.facebook.com/#!/ToxicGrindMachine http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/toxicgrindmachine2 Last edited by Toxic Grind Machine : January 24th, 2012 at 08:29 AM.

January 24th, 2012, 08:46 AM	#19 (permalink)
Toxic Grind Machine black neon bob Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 258	Okay, can someone give the download a try and let me know if it works? I have it working on my PCs, but some others may have problems with it. Let me know! __________________ http://www.facebook.com/#!/ToxicGrindMachine http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/toxicgrindmachine2

January 24th, 2012, 08:48 AM	#20 (permalink)
osum Misanthrope Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: South Germany Posts: 381	works! __________________ social shit: soundcloud \| twitter \| facebook

January 24th, 2012, 08:50 AM	#21 (permalink)
Toxic Grind Machine black neon bob Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 258	Cheers Osum! __________________ http://www.facebook.com/#!/ToxicGrindMachine http://soundcloud.com/robert-slump http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/toxicgrindmachine2

January 24th, 2012, 05:21 PM	#22 (permalink)
ttrentt Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 403	As somebody who grew up listeing to Front 242, Front Line Assembly, KMFDM, Delerium, Noise Unit, I have an incredible passion for guitar based industrial (even thought Front 242 isn't), it is my favorite genre of music. I am totally stoked you give us the stems for this. I am getting back into writing industrial music an TGM is something to look up too. Amazing. This shit is amazing.

January 25th, 2012, 12:33 AM	#23 (permalink)
Kenny Lee Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 493	Here Bro!! Sorry I couldn't get your drum midi files to work. It kept loading a 15 miunte long midi file flying at like 280bpm hahahaa. I love this kinda stuff. I just heard your original tune just now, maybe I shoulda turned up the synths hey? http://metalmusicians.net/toxicgrindmachine/tgm.mp3 __________________ rEkorDiNg gEaR Agile 9 sTrAng-ErrZ >> Fractal Audio << << Duet >> >> Logic Pro << 5 sTRaNg Ibanez bASs >> Studio Devil << DrUmS <<>> Superior Drummer << pLuGinZ >> Default Logic \|\| Metric Halo \|\| Ozone \|\| PSP \|\| Slate \|\| Voxengo <<

January 25th, 2012, 01:37 AM	#24 (permalink)
Splat88 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Vegas Posts: 1,365	Here's my mix. Enjoy! http://dl.dropbox.com/u/868701/Sneap...t%20Master.mp3 __________________ Rock over London Rock on Chicago Dolemite is his name, and fuckin' up motherfuckers is his game http://www.myspace.com/marchharelv http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...?bandID=404561

January 25th, 2012, 02:53 AM	#25 (permalink)
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