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Discussion in 'Symphony X (Unofficial)' started by Ryan M., May 17, 2010.

  1. Ryan M.

    Ryan M. Theocratic Fanatic

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    Well I get bored sometimes and I write poems that have similarities to Symphony X's lyrics. :headbang::headbang: Criticism is welcome... I know I'm not too great. lol. Ok... I know... some are too SymX-ish. Added some drawings I did. lol. Enjoy!

    Here are just a few:

    -[Farewell To Blackened Skies]-

    A stranger in this land
    I raise my bloody hand
    When the sun rises up in the sky
    To the end we fly

    And on the final night
    The trumpet calls aloud
    Awaken by the blinding light
    The chosen rise up to the cloud

    Leaving the darkness far behind
    Vision comes to me, so blind

    But I will run
    Forever more
    Beyond the sun
    Beyond the door

    And from the rising sun
    Comes a brighter day
    For this life is done
    And the time has come to fly away

    In between the worlds I lie
    To the gates of heaven we fly

    Never rising higher
    The Devil's falling down
    Straight into the fire
    Forever he will drown

    Angels flying in the sky
    Can you hear the trumpet sound?
    To the end of life we fly
    I am falling to the ground

    You will fade
    With all your dreams
    You raise the blade
    Oblivious of death it seems

    I say, "Farewell!"
    To blackened skies
    Strike the bell
    The world of lies

    There is no greater joy I find
    Then leaving this dead world behind

    So lift me high, beyond the sun
    Take me to the promised land
    All wrongdoing, it is done
    You carry me within your hand

    Angels flying in the sky
    Can you hear the trumpet sound?
    To the end of life we fly
    I am falling to the ground

    Leaving the darkness far behind
    Vision comes to me, so blind

    And I will run
    Forever more
    Beyond the sun
    Beyond the door

    I say, "Farewell!"
    To blackened skies
    Strike the bell
    The world of lies

    [​IMG]

    -[The Fallen One]-

    Dwelling in shadows, King of all the dark
    Once an angel, fallen, inventor of the mark
    The fire in his eyes
    The lure within his lies

    Attempting total domination
    He claims heaven as his nation
    He rises then falls
    Through the night we hear his calls

    Falling down from shattered skies
    Ruler of the serpents, ruler of lies
    We can hear your cries
    With the wind it never dies

    Rising against the creator of existence
    He claims domination
    Another failed resistance
    He's destined to damnation

    "I will dominate
    Paradise I'll recreate"
    Cast into this world of perfection
    The serpent spreads the vicious infection

    Falling down from shattered skies
    Ruler of the serpents, ruler of lies
    We can hear your cries
    With the wind it never dies

    He leads the horde
    Of the serpent's bloody sword
    He's the man within the nightmare
    He is the face of my despair

    Once an angel of the city of gold
    Now beaten down and growing old
    With eyes of death
    And fire in his breath

    Falling down from shattered skies
    Ruler of the serpents, ruler of lies
    We can hear your cries
    With the wind it never dies

    [​IMG]

    -[The Savior In This Nightmare]-

    Falling down like shattered glass
    Waiting in the shade of night
    Waiting for this time to pass
    Watching as they fall and fight

    Warriors fall
    And swords collide
    Standing tall
    In the sky they ride

    As steel meets steel
    And the sky ignites
    The death I feel
    On these endless nights

    Bodies slain
    Upon the bloodstained shore
    It once gave me pain
    But now I cry no more

    So much sorrow
    Before my eyes
    I must reach tomorrow
    A reach beyond the world of lies

    The night reflects
    Within my tear stained-eyes
    My mind the earth infects
    Broken down by lies

    You ask me how it's done
    On this day without the sun
    It's the light within my soul
    The savior in this nightmare, dull

    He who gives me life
    And washes sin away
    He who overpowers knife
    And secures for me, a brighter day

    How can this be?
    What's come of me?
    Why can't you see?
    LORD SET ME FREE!

    You ask me how it's done
    On this day without the sun
    It's the light within my soul
    The savior in this nightmare, dull

    [​IMG]

    [The Blackened Page]-

    Temptation wraps it's hands around my mind
    Trapped within the dream
    Throwing all I loved behind
    To enter into heaven it may seem

    Wandering the halls of gold
    In the land of times of old
    But what do you see?
    A blackened page in this eternity?

    I am a blind man
    Wandering the wasteland
    Take this pain away
    I am a blind man
    Raising higher, my hand
    To the sun of a brighter day

    Symphony of flames
    Songs of doom
    Calling cursed names
    To the whitewashed tomb

    Will I ever see?
    Will I ever know?
    Is this really me?
    Where am I to go?

    Writer of my destiny
    Creator of my life
    Show me my true destiny
    Help me drop the bloody knife

    I am a blind man
    Wandering the wasteland
    Take this pain away
    I am a blind man
    Raising higher, my hand
    To the sun of a brighter day

    Rip away this blackened page
    I can't read what the Devil says will come
    Show me the hope of a brighter age
    Show me the way before the sound of the drum

    I have wandered far away
    So give me hope and wash my sin away
    LORD my fate is in your hands
    So carry me to brighter lands

    I am a blind man
    Wandering the wasteland
    Take this pain away
    I am a blind man
    Raising higher, my hand
    To the sun of a brighter day

    Break the chains of condemnation
    Break the chains away
    Save me from this fallen nation
    Bring me home on the final day

    [​IMG]

    -[Refuge In The Dark]-

    The clock is ticking as we wait
    The bell shall ring at the darkest hour
    Our hearts are burning, full of hate
    Run towards the highest tower

    People taking refuge in the graves
    Dwelling in the pit within
    People selling themselves as slaves
    Giving in to hidden sin

    Every single broken warrior
    Looking for a refuge in the dark
    Waiting in the dark forever more
    On this journey we embark

    Off the edge of the highest mountain Searching for the crown
    Thirsting for an enchanted fountain
    We're on a path that's twisted down

    No hope at all
    Not a horror to compare
    Another time I fall
    Into the pit of my despair

    A search is pointless
    No end I find at all
    But when I am lifeless
    I can here the kingdom call

    "Come to the tower
    I will guide you with my ever burning flame
    The time has come for a brighter hour
    We have come to see the end of this game!

    Rise again from the burning ashes
    Fire never burning out
    Though broken down by a thousand lashes
    Never again will you be in doubt"

    Beyond this world of hate
    Is a land no man could create

    And I will come to see
    All the visions of eternity
    Life after death
    I take my final breath

    I will live forever
    In the kingdom of the light
    Never fading, ever
    To the end, for God I'll fight

    The king of kings
    Is king of all
    Ruler of all things
    Savior for the fall

    [​IMG]
     
  2. Marwen

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    That sounds more like christian rock. :erk:

    Some parts are better than others.

    I like the last drawing. :)
     
  3. Ryan M.

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    Yeah. I am a christian so certain ones are going to have that more than others. I had a series that was like 100% of that, and then I've had 100% mythology ones also. this is just a big mix of different ones from different series releases. And thanks about the drawing
     
  4. Ryan M.

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    A new one:

    -[Fall of The Tyrant]-

    A storm is raging over the night
    The beasts are calling
    Collision of the dark and light
    Lightning strikes, the tyrant's falling

    Tragedy
    The serpent will deceive
    But victory
    For all who believe

    No fear in the end of time
    For blood was shed for me
    One was punished for my crime
    To give me all eternity

    As the empire falls
    And steel collides
    We hear the calls
    Of the beast who hides

    Sound the mighty drum
    The darkness falls tonight
    The break of day has come
    And we can see the blinding light

    Restless cries of the fallen one
    The light reveals your pain
    You can see the rising sun
    You can see there is no gain

    The tyrant of the night
    The serpent king below
    God's victory will come with the rays of light
    This is the truth the chosen know

    No fear in the end of time
    For blood was shed for me
    One was punished for my crime
    To give me all eternity

    A storm is raging over the night
    The beasts are calling
    Collision of the dark and light
    Lightning strikes, the tyrant's falling
     
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    You really put some effort to this.
     
  6. Ryan M.

    Ryan M. Theocratic Fanatic

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    Thank you :D

    Check out my latest:

    -[Fall of The Tyrant]-

    A storm is raging over the night
    The beasts are calling
    Collision of the dark and light
    Lightning strikes, the tyrant's falling

    Tragedy
    The serpent will deceive
    But victory
    For all who believe

    No fear in the end of time
    For blood was shed for me
    One was punished for my crime
    To give me all eternity

    As the empire falls
    And steel collides
    We hear the calls
    Of the beast who hides

    Sound the mighty drum
    The darkness falls tonight
    The break of day has come
    And we can see the blinding light

    Restless cries of the fallen one
    The light reveals your pain
    You can see the rising sun
    You can see there is no gain

    The tyrant of the night
    The serpent king below
    God's victory will come with the rays of light
    This is the truth the chosen know

    No fear in the end of time
    For blood was shed for me
    One was punished for my crime
    To give me all eternity

    A storm is raging over the night
    The beasts are calling
    Collision of the dark and light
    Lightning strikes, the tyrant's falling
     

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