Post em. Tell me what you think they'd be. I made one about two years ago called Broken Doll. Basically about the idea of becoming less and less human as time goes on. A castaway in Metal is left in the dust Sent through hell and earth and paid back in rust “(Clank, Clank)” So goes the sound of the prosthetics A looked down upon existence that’s now so pathetic Their bodies seen as a junkyard To be left in the past and the days before Metal scraps their skin like nails And does worse even worse if their organs shall fail The metal is a cold mountain and a reality to receive To receive immortality at the loss of their humanity To achieve the better alternatives within their enhanced minds Time shall do to them that which is not so kind They shall walk the Earth forever as it is the punishment they’ve received They all received immortality at the loss of their humanity They will walk through the deserts They will walk through the storms They will walk through the jungles They will walk through the cities They will walk through hell and live to tell the tale Only if the artificial organs don’t short out or fail To receive immortality itself is the best blessing But as to where your future or end lies then it shall keep you guessing One does not have to throw the curse unto all One broken mechanical body is just another broken doll One day the time will come for us to all fall But do you really want to die as just a broken doll? I sit by and scratch the writing into the white wall Broken prosthetic arm, I’m just another broken doll Time will do unto me what it has done unto others The death of a Cyborg is no less of a bother Left than as nothing more than a Ghost in the Shell Their time left on Earth will feel like a jail A prisoner within their own body but the virtual heaven will call Forward into the net therefor you are not a broken doll You live on forever no one there order to you all Your life has been renewed you were never a broken doll So throw em out there. You think this would make a good song?