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Requesting feedback for my creative piece for university

Discussion in 'Maiden Downunder' started by Shadow298, Nov 4, 2012.

  1. Shadow298

    Shadow298 UNLEASH THE GUAN

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    Hi everyone.
    Here is the link to the novella that I am submitting for my Honours degree in Creative Writing: http://fav.me/d5k43vz
    It's based upon the Japanese supernatural Light Novel style (without illustrations), complete with similar themes and cliches.

    I currently require feedback within the week on coherency of narrative, continuity within the story, character construction, grammar, et cetera et cetera.

    If you have a Deviant Art account, please comment there. If not, please use this thread.

    Know that I ma asking a bit but the story doesn't take very long to read.

    thanks in advance

    Shadow
     
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    I can see it ok.
     
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