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A song I wrote

Discussion in 'General Metal Discussion' started by RideForVengance, Sep 9, 2004.

  1. Cythraul

    Cythraul Active Member

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    A lot of metal bands write the most vapid and trite lyrics I've ever had the misfortune of reading. Metal lyrics suck.
     
  2. Lies and Perfidy

    Lies and Perfidy Gentleman of the Road

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    The following are obviously the greatest lyrics ever written by the hand of man:

    No More Pussy Metal

    Alright!

    Big modern metal bands do nothing but blow
    They use too many keyboards and play too slow
    Random, meaningless acoustic bits
    And we say - ENOUGH OF THAT SHIT

    Chorus:
    This shit has gotta end, someone has to make a stand, and tell all these poseurs there's changes to be made
    Defenestrator's here, to sweep the stage clear, and bring back metal the way it should be played!
    NO MORE
    PUSSY METAL
    NO MORE
    PUSSY METAL

    Pretentious wimpy crap is the order of the day
    The guitarists play like wankers, and the singers all sound gay
    They call this bullshit metal, and we can't tell you why
    All we can tell you is - THESE POSEURS MUST DIE

    Chorus

    Kill some poseurs!

    [solo]

    [group chant]
    NO
    MORE
    PUSSY
    METAL
    NO
    MORE
    PUSSY
    METAL

    Are you sick of eight-minute, two-riff songs?
    Do you think that melodeath's been big for way too long?
    If you feel like we feel, then join the fight
    And for real metal - BANG YOUR HEAD TONIGHT

    Chorus

    NO!
    MORE!
    PUSSY!
    METAL!
     
  3. LordFireworm

    LordFireworm Member

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    The music for that song is sweet.
    GALLOPING FUCKING RULES.
     
  4. Ultimate_Symphony

    Ultimate_Symphony Rusted Angel

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    Love that one :lol:

    Here's a song that I wrote back in high school, pretty generic if I say so myself:

    Living In A Coma

    Lying down like an empty corpse
    lifeless and frightened
    1000 years pass and desperation still blocks my mind
    no one here to save me now
    hades personified
    living in a coma

    Chorus

    Why can't I get out of this dream
    is this how my life is meant to be?
    living in a coma I blame everyone for my loss
    living in a coma I curse your name for my pain

    Awakened I realize the cruel reality
    a true living hell has overcomed my head
    I try to succeed against this life long struggle
    and then I fall
    ...again I fall

    ''repeat chorus''

    outro

    Shadows haunt your soul
    shadows haunt your soul
    awakened, now you're lost!

    This one is a sketch of a song that I wrote a year ago, pretty shitty since I didn't pay attention to rhyme or how the words work together:

    Tears In Heaven

    Awakened and dazed
    homicide and bloodshed
    saddened and bemused
    I desperately try to get out of this lacrimal

    Chorus

    Tears in heaven
    The choir of death arises
    angels sing the funeral hymn
    as I await the news from the abyss

    Funeral time has come
    the heavens hear my lament
    the angels weep as I try to deal with this dilemma

    ''repeat chorus''

    years of famine
    years of pain
    war explodes, and the innocent suffer
     
  5. Lies and Perfidy

    Lies and Perfidy Gentleman of the Road

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    I wrote it, and it's going to be recorded once I get together with DBK and Agathocles of Metal-Archives to do some jamming.
     
  6. Jean-Pierre

    Jean-Pierre Son of The Bitch

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    Haha, Holocaust - Metal Mania, anyone?

    You'd better get some good fucking music together for that one. :headbang:
     
  7. Nico

    Nico Onward!

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    This song > yours


    Blood Duster - Tittie

    3 riffs is all we need
    don't need no shitty lead
    simple is how we vote
    this bit is just one note
    can't find a good song name
    they all sound the fuckin'same
    something clever
    something witty
    i think i'll call this song tittie!
     
  8. Profanity

    Profanity The Post Master

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    Your lyics are average but still good. You should try and make them sound more original.
     
  9. RideForVengance

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    I'm not very inspired to do anything, cause I dont really have a band. I'm hoping to jam with this guy who just moved here recently and happens to be just about the only other drummer in town... the one I jam with now... I'm not even gonna start.

    But if I did play with a band it'd be THRASH THRASH THRASH!!!

    I dont really care about lyrics sounding kinda cliche as long as its a badass Cliche. Much better than being a bullshit Cliche thats trying to be deep.
     
  10. ShadowOfDeath

    ShadowOfDeath Warrior of Black Metal

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    My band is even less of an existence. The fuckers either kicked me out or the band is practically dead. We haven't practiced in 2 months, which was our first productive rehearsal since we got a new guitarist (who sadly cannot stay focused and plays random riffs throughout practice, or just gets drunk) and we were planning to release our first demo soon. As for lyrics I have a lot of stuff written, i'll look for a good one later.
     
  11. Jean-Pierre

    Jean-Pierre Son of The Bitch

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    Did they die from listening to your solo "work"?
     
  12. The_Evil_Gentleman

    The_Evil_Gentleman Power Metal Owns

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    Slaughterhouse For The Wicked

    No permission for the sinners
    The wicked one will recieve it all
    You never thought you'd be winners
    All of you, have to go and fall

    In my house, there's your fate
    Death it'll set you free
    Slowly you'll taste the pain for all the hate
    Welcome here just follow me

    Enter from the door
    And exit with Death

    ----------------------------
    (Chorus)

    (Slaughterhouse for the wicked
    It's a nice place to be
    Just believe me and enter
    Just enter
    Enter the final house) x 2

    --------------------------

    (Breakdown)

    Now why are you crying?
    Since you never cared about what you did
    There's the evil one sighing
    And time to cut off your head

    In my house, there's your fate
    Death it'll set you free
    Slowly you'll taste the pain for all the hate
    Welcome here just follow me

    Time's against you
    Taste the pain
    You'll have it all

    (Chorus)

    (Solo)

    In my house, there's your fate
    Death it'll set you free
    Slowly you'll taste the pain for all the hate
    Welcome here just follow me

    Enter from the door
    And exit with DDDDDDEEEEEEAAAAAATTTTTTHHHHH

    (Chorus)
     
  13. Nico

    Nico Onward!

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    *Highfives*
     

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