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An Essay I wrote about Communion And The Oracle

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  1. Lucius Octavion

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    I just wrote this essay about Communion And The Oracle for my English class. I'm not sure if everything I wrote is accurate, but I tried putting in some of my interpretations. Its kind of long but let me know what you think! :)

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    “Communion And The Oracle” is a song written and performed by the New Jersey based progressive 
    metal band, Symphony X. It is a part of a larger series of songs from their concept album, V: The New Mythology 
    Suite. Symphony X created a musical rendition of mythological tale that connects ancient Atlantis, Egyptian 
    mysticism, and astrology to the origins of mankind and what our purpose is here on Earth. The details and story 
    elements of The New Mythology Suite are fantastic, but they are besides the message, they parallel ideas that 
    relate to our present world as we know it. The lyrics can be difficult to decipher when taken out of the context of 
    the entire story. 
    
           “Communion And The Oracle” is a song about having hope in a time of chaos and disorder. It also speaks of a 
    mystical, collective, spiritual unity that exists between all people, the Earth, and all natural things. This theme is 
    very reminiscent of the “oversoul” that is repeatedly discussed in John Steinbeck’s The Grapes of Wrath. Therefore,
    the song does not have a particular speaker, but rather the collective voice of all people. The word “communion” in 
    the title is representative of this. “The Oracle”, in the story refers to the child Ma’at, who in ancient Egyptian 
    mythology, descended from the heavens as a bringer of truth and wisdom to teach the Atlateans (the presumed 
    progenitors of modern age mankind) an order of divine equality and world peace. This order, as explained in the lyrics
    of “Communion and the Oracle”, is supposed to be centered on a balanced “yin-yang” relationship between light and
    darkness. The Atlanteans were an extremely advanced race that was supposedly destroyed due to their society’s 
    own corruption, but “Communion and the Oracle” discusses what must be done so that we as humans can ultimately 
    reach the highest level of order and peace. Basically, we, in modern times are just rediscovering the same advanced 
    knowledge and technology that the ancient Atlanteans once had, both the good and evil, enabling us to destroy 
    ourselves just as easily. However the key message in all this heavily stresses the fact that we humans can control, 
    shape, and change our own destiny as a united group.
    
           The song can be interpreted as being set in a time period much like our own, where the world has been ravaged
    by war, greed, destruction, and the inequality that we see around us, where many people are starving, yet there still 
    exists an elite rich class. The “order of equality” can even be equated to the idealistic embodiment of Marxism and 
    early concepts of communism. This presents an interesting idea that has mystified humanity since the beginning of 
    time, blurring the line between a style of government and religion. “Communion and the Oracle” speaks to every man,
    woman, and child who is willing to unite as one in the order of equality in hope of restoring balance in a time of 
    chaos. 
    	
           The first stanza reads:
    
    All we know, now has come undone
    Balance lost between the Moon and Sun
    Hear our prayers - Keepers of the Skies
    Divine
    Upon us all - let your wisdom shine (1.1-5)
    
    	This stanza states the condition of the world, where everything is in an apocalyptic state and all that we’ve 
    created is, or is about to be destroyed. “Keepers of the Skies Divine” (1.3-4) refers to the child goddess Ma’at, the 
    embodiment of truth and balance, whom we call upon for wisdom. From a non-mythological standpoint, this can also 
    mean we are looking into our own souls, seeking for our own inner human strength and wisdom. The “moon and sun” 
    (1.2) theme repeats itself several times throughout the song and can correspond to light and darkness, day and 
    night, and good and evil. In this case, the dark side has overpowered the light side, as explained in greater detail in 
    other songs from V: The New Mythology Suite, such as “Absence of Light”, “The Death of Balance”, and “A Fool’s 
    Paradise”. 
    	
           The second stanza of “Communion And The Oracle” reads:
    
    Losing faith as the madness prevails
    in us all we are searching for a reason,
    a need to calm the storm
    In our sails - let your winds be strong (2.1-4)
    
    This explains how many people have fallen into despair and given up hope in the dark time, but still many try to find a
    reason to carry on despite the chaotic conditions. “In our sails – let your winds be strong” (2.4) is the seeking of 
    strength to propel forward, as a sailboat does through a vast sea that never seems to end. 
    	
           The third stanza has to do with us becoming back in touch with nature and the earth. It assumes that positive 
    energy and power can be generated through being spiritually united through the earth and the natural elements. It 
    reads:
    
    Breathe the air around you
    The oceans fill your veins and winds
    embrace your heart
    Feel the change within you
    The Sun and Moon align - The Grand
    Design awaits a new start (3.1-6)
    
    “Feel the change within you” (3.4) is an important line as coming down to the simple, bear earth from our unnatural 
    human society sparks a change in the meaning of life. One who is spiritually in touch with nature will feel 
    re-invigorated and see life in a different way. “The Sun and Moon align – The Grand Design awaits a new start” 
    (3.5-6) bears some astrological importance, and the alignment of the sun and moon (again there is a reference to 
    light and dark) may signify the end of the world, followed by a spiritual rebirth of humanity (referred to as The Grand 
    Design). In other words, there is hope that something good is going to come out in the end from this apocalypse. 
    	
    
           The next two stanzas refer again to the mystical nature of the child Ma’at, who represents the power of 
    wisdom and truth. The fourth stanza reads:
    
    From the skies, looking down on you
    Through the clouds tainted crystal blue
    "Such advancement, yet lacking the
    control,
    so unaware of your earthly roles" (4.1-5)
    
    Part of this is spoken by Ma’at herself as she looks down on us from the heavens. The line “Through the clouds 
    tainted crystal blue”, paints a very vivid, surreal, heavenly, and ethereal image. “Such advancement, yet lacking the 
    control, so unaware of your earthly roles”, is an observation made my Ma’at and those who have become aware of
    the frightening unbalance between good and evil. It means that although our society is so advanced and 
    sophisticated, we really don’t know what we are doing as we destroy the earth that gave us life, unaware that our 
    advanced power will ultimately result in our doom. Our “earthly role” should be to care for our world, not destroy it,
    which is such a big issue nowadays, concerning environmental protection, global warming, deforestation, pollution, 
    etc. 
    	
           Stanza five reads:
    
    Praise this child and the words of her
    rhyme
    A sacred gift - Magic of the Five will
    bring you tranquillity
    A new order of equality (5.1-5)
    
    The child is the goddess, and her rhyme is her wisdom and advice to us all. Throughout V: The New Mythology Suite,
    there is a strong importance placed on the number five. There is little information on what the particular significance 
    of the number five is, but there is great power in this “Magic of the Five”, which can be used for good or evil. The 
    next stanza discusses this even further:
    
    Five senses come alive - Five reasons
    thrive - Five nations unite - Unite as
    one
    Night and Day will find a way to keep
    the Balance true
    Let the Sky and Stars be your guide -
    the destination is up to you (6.1-7)
    
    The first three lines, “Five senses come alive - Five reasons thrive - Five nations unite - Unite as one” (6.1-3) are 
    pretty self explanatory. It means that we will be powerful and able to restore balance once we have come to rely on 
    our instincts (assuming there is still good in each of us) and unite as one. “Night and Day will find a way to keep the 
    Balance true” (6.4-5) makes yet another reference to light and darkness (good and evil), saying that there will be a 
    time when we can restore order even though darkness seems to be the permanently stronger side. “Let the Sky and
    Stars be you guide – the destination is up to you” (6.6-7) suggests that we abandon many of our sophisticated 
    technologies in order to let the Earth be our guide. The time when we can restore order is marked by the alignment
    of five planets, and the time when we realize the lesson of equality hidden in the rhyme told by Ma’at mentioned in 
    the fifth stanza. Then, good and evil will be balanced once more, leaving our final destiny up to us to rediscover and 
    reshape, hopefully avoiding the same demise of the Atlanteans.  
    	
    
           The final stanza reads:
    
    Raise our heads up to the Skies
    Feel the essence of Time
    Changing ways like the shifting tides
    In the waves hear the Rhyme (7.1-4)
    
    It again stresses the importance of being re-invigorated with the essence of nature and time. Shifting tides and 
    waves are again, used as examples of earthly things that surround us. “In the waves hear the Rhyme” (7.4) tells us 
    that we must look to the Earth to give us the answer to restoring balance. 
    	
    
           The quality of these lyrics is impeccable. The choice of words really creates so much vivid imagery with a really 
    epic and mythological feel. The repeated thematic elements such as light and dark, astrology, and nature add 
    significantly to the meaning of the song. 
    
           Musically, the piece is impeccably composed and performed. It sounds simple but it is actually very complex to 
    produce such a glorious, epic sound. Many advanced composition techniques are used, such as polyrhythm, 
    chromaticism, fusion of several different musical styles, and most notably, the harmonic modulation between many 
    tonal centers without breaking the moving melodic line. Atmospheric keyboards / orchestration, soaring guitar solos 
    that manage to be amazing and not annoying, and crystal clear vocal choruses all add to the epic, grandiose scale of
    this piece. The most amazing section is probably the 5:12 mark to the 5:37 mark, building up to the magnificent 
    sound of the final stanza. It is just so awesome how this piece manages to sound so epic but not in a cheesy, 
    power-metal (a stylistic metal subgenre) kind of way. It is also important to note that although the song is so 
    glorious when the lyrics end, the song ends with a very ominous tone by utilizing the dominant V chord to modulate 
    to a minor i. It makes it very clear with an epic tone that the turmoil is still there. The music then tonicizes to the 
    minor iii, which is a modal change as the third scale degree of a minor scale would normally be a major III. This 
    creates a very ominous tone. It symbolizes the specter of our looming destruction if we mess up our chance to bring 
    equality, balance, and peace to Earth.  
    
           The song is timeless and will always have a very important meaning to all of humanity. The music and words fit 
    together perfectly and “Communion And The Oracle” is only a fraction of the entire suite. It any song makes me have
    hope for mankind, it is definitely this song, because as it seems right now, we are all rushing at an alarming rate 
    toward our doom. 
     
  2. Postulate

    Postulate Have a nice day! :)

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    "The “order of equality” can even be equated to the idealistic embodiment of Marxism and early concepts of communism."

    you are sick. sick!
     
  3. Lucius Octavion

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    I'm a fascist communist
     
  4. Wander

    Wander 10+2=6

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    I think it was funny how you included a fair bit of Symphony X praise to the end of the essay...

    But I think it was nicely done. Good (over)-analyzation!
     
  5. Marwen

    Marwen Five Align

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    Great song to write an essay about.

    Nice job. :)
     
  6. Lucius Octavion

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    By the way, I'm really sorry it's so hard to read on here, but I don't know how to type it in to get it to show up the right way.

    EDIT: I figured out how to fix it! So now it should look a lot easier to read.
     
  7. prman

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    "The song is timeless and will always have a very important meaning to all of humanity." WOW!
     
  8. Wander

    Wander 10+2=6

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    Maybe Mike or Russell will show up and tell that the lyrics are actually about a really bad hangover.

    It could be!
     
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    I don't know how serious your teacher will be about grading this essay (are you being graded on both grammar and info or just grammar?), but I could never get away with statments as bold as these without getting penalized...lol! Other than that I only remember seeing one minor mispelling, you spelled Atlanteans as "Atlateans".

    Oh, and you should know better than to bring up anything to do with Marxism on this board! :p
     
  10. Edward Miller

    Edward Miller New Metal Member

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    I liked your essay. But I would add something else. It seems to me that the essay is unfinished. To write my own essay, I use the service https://tooly.io/declaration-of-independence/. Here you can find an essay on any topic. Personally, I found many essays on declaration-of-independence, and it helped me a lot. You can find both a finished essay and a great idea for your own essay. Personally I recommend it.
     
  11. Vandert

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  12. Mary Owen

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    I agree, it`s very interesting, and well written!
     
  13. Torriloy

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