Black metal dissection style mix - need vocal help

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/71178437/Black metal thing.m4a

Here's a quick half hour or so headphone mix i chucked together of a black metal-esque track, but I can't seem to get the vocals right

any help is massively appreciated, with anything, not just the vocals

 

More verb then

Any comments on anything else would be appreciated if anyone has any, go on, rip me to shreds!