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Cool atmospheric/cinematic intro i made

Discussion in 'Production' started by Gujukal, Oct 15, 2013.

  1. Gujukal

    Gujukal Member

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    Just wanted to share an intro im currently working on. It's not done yet so i will add stuff to it and maybe change some of it. It will probably have some sort of vocals in it, maybe similiar to the ones in Without Walls - MMF :)
    Would love some constructive critique to make it better!
    Here it is: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/82776193/Cinematic intro1.mp3
     
  2. benjy

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    dude this is really sick. I like it a a a lot. My only thing is that boomy drum in the beginning is a little overkill. maybe turn it down a bit. Besides that this intro is super rad.
     
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    oroinvictus dangert billy

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    +1
     
  4. Gujukal

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    Hehe yeah, i forgot to automate that drum hit in the beginning. Definitely too loud! Anything more that could be improved?
     
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    I actually don't think it's too loud, personally. But I'm sort of thinking of it in terms of when I played in orchestra in high school. I just remember when things hit, they hit hard and loud. Right now it seems like it hits forte to me, but if I was gonna make it hit, it should be fortissimo, and it should be a wide sound.
    This is the easiest way I can describe it. It should either be quieter, or bigger and harder. I dunno I could see myself going either direction.
     
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    sounds about right
     
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    oroinvictus dangert billy

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    overall I think the percussion elements are just a bit too loud and 'upfront', it tends to detract from all of the other elements of the mix.
     
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    that sounds so sick what did you use to make those sounds
     

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