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Discussion in 'Musicians Discussion' started by Travisty, Jan 8, 2006.

  1. OfManAndMetal

    OfManAndMetal satan said i get a cookie

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    *eye twitches*...seriously, listen to metallica master of puppets (see lyrics)
    or any iron maiden song for that matter.... damn i am at a loss of words after readin' that...
     
  2. Samuel

    Samuel Son of Donald

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    *Holds MTLHEAD_789 back*
    Just let it go man, just let it go.... Nah go get 'im.




    :loco:
     
  3. OfManAndMetal

    OfManAndMetal satan said i get a cookie

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    LOL..... this guy obviously doesnt listen to metal... or just choses not to
     
  4. Black Core

    Black Core Sir MIMA & Leo Godfather

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    I think you're right, it's all blood this, hate that.
    Of course there are exceptions, but still...
     
  5. ProjectedBlack

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    Can anybody post impressions on the lyrics I posted?
     
  6. evilette

    evilette New Metal Member

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    Oh yeah I've done that. Only cos most of the "deep" shit I actually think about just seems cheesy to go on about in lyrics, unless you can come up with some sort of cool metaphors.

    Here's an example of the mindless violence lyrics:

    Shotgun in hand, blast to the face
    Fragments of your skull litter this place
    Brains in the air, erratic blood splatter
    Thick, putrid stench of your faecal matter

    Another one down, she's twelve years of age
    So gratifying but I still feel this rage
    Straight through the gut, her white blouse in tatters
    Foolish of her - to think her life matters

    They should have seen it coming
    They brought it on themselves
    This torture I'm unleashing
    Has only yet begun
    Cold steel grasped in hand
    It's power at my fingertips
    Your torment satisfies my need
    It's pleasure as you break and bleed

    Deathdealer - the only one
    Deathdealer - the dealer has won
    Deathdealer - fear my name
    Death to all in the deathdealer's game

    Her punishment due, she falls to her knees
    My lust for pain will be appeased
    Crack to the skull, blood gushes forth
    No mercy for this bitch I'll slaughter the whore


    The "they should have seen it coming..." and "Deathdealer" chorus thing parts happen a couple of times each.

    Don't worry I wasn't trying to be too originaly :) jus going for violence really...
     
  7. evilette

    evilette New Metal Member

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    ^^ oh and if anyone was gonna steal em it's too late they're already in use. Soon to be recorded.
     
  8. Othala

    Othala New Metal Member

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    I guess I can do so. I really liked the first one. From The Ashes I believe it was called. The rest didn't really grab my interest too much, at least not as the first one did.
     
  9. Travisty

    Travisty Slaying the Masses 24/7

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    I think pantera has some ov the best lyrics, not so much death and killing as much as respect me or get your ass kicked.
     
  10. Black Core

    Black Core Sir MIMA & Leo Godfather

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    they do, don't they:)
    there's actually meaning to their lyrics
     
  11. Travisty

    Travisty Slaying the Masses 24/7

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    was that sarcastic?:err:
     
  12. Travisty

    Travisty Slaying the Masses 24/7

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    shadow games

    stand back for the revoloution
    regret the berdon of retribution
    enforce the right for our destruction
    at the knees of domination

    await the rhyme of annihilation
    wipe down the entire nation
    closing in I see our extinction
    from the eyes of another creation

    shadow games
    fooled me again
    call my name
    when I win
    shadow games
    cold is my skin
    I am not your reason, I have no reason

    fall apart from a stail trasfusion
    in my head another possesion
    knee deeep in sufocation
    hide myself for the right occation

    stare on to the crucafiction
    hold your tongue its an execution
    you can't hurt me by rejection
    break bones for determenation

    shadow games
    fooled you again
    call your name
    when you win
    shadow games
    cold is your skin
    you are not my reason, you have no reason

    (this next part is where the song breaks down)

    psycho mind games
    I feel your presence
    primal war games
    your prayers disgust me

    (and here it picks up)

    look apon this battle field/war zone
    so dangerus and agonistic I know
    pools of blood and fifty years of flesh torn
    broken dreams/hostile screams reborn
    the hell is shadow games

    I was thinking about changing the rhyme scheme, but there it is.
     
  13. Black Core

    Black Core Sir MIMA & Leo Godfather

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    yes it was:p
     
  14. Travisty

    Travisty Slaying the Masses 24/7

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    thanks for clearing that up
     
  15. Travisty

    Travisty Slaying the Masses 24/7

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    wow dude those are pretty good like slayer almost
     
  16. Black Core

    Black Core Sir MIMA & Leo Godfather

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    That evil part sound familiar
     
  17. Kasdraven

    Kasdraven New Metal Member

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    Prosthetics R' Us
    Intro
    Breaking the mold has become the mold.
    Struggling for individuality has become the trend.
    This is the social hypocrasy spoon fed like shit to the blind cast away.

    Verse 1
    Cutting. carving, scathing and scratching
    Crying, whining, bitching and latching
    LATCH - to a goddamn fortified lie
    Filled to the seal with a weighted casting die - cheat
    It's turned society into a multi-shit melting pot
    and bled into a replicant of individual thought
    Follow the leader - a national passtime
    Turned a superficial gum bleed to a national crime
    a world wide rhyme
    Everyone different?
    A oxymoron like the truth in the lie

    Chorus
    PUNCTURUING - A syringe that bleeds you thin
    PROSTHETICS - The mass suffocation of us all within
    Prosthetics R' Us(x4)
    PROSTHETICS(x3)

    Faced with the truth you become the receding, seething little bitch
    Tut, tut, cunt
    Breaking down, and stressing out and- WHAT!?
    No, fuck you! I don't wanna hear it!
    You will not run away or cry!
    It does not justify your role in living the lie!

    Verse 2
    Sift through the broken facade of a diplomacy
    FUCKED
    Sift through the used and destroyed prosperity
    FUCKED
    Turning a good thing bad - A randomization method
    A contradictory immoral lie that is now self fed
    I got a tire iron meant for your slanderous name
    A gas can and a match for the cast away fame
    How's it feel to be a social distortion?
    A bullshit blur conserved, reversed and raped in contortion!

    Chorus

    Individuality has finally had its asshole collectively fucked
    by the millions of pussies unable to find their own individuality.

    © Copyright 2006 Lee Tish (Meaning me)
     
  18. WNxScythe

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    The crimson Orb doth shine on its upward path
    Manifold dying shear Tongues chase an arclite-shaft
    A Blazon’d in the Northern sky for aught to see
    Aye, but tis Naught nor but silt next to thee

    Autumn’s Aurora ‘shrines its last wretchèd loom
    The singèd eyes of the Beholden do consume
    Bloodred corpses have painted what ere were green
    But match’d with thine Eyes, immortal beauty be but fiend

    The steeliee rapiers of nature’s torpor foal
    Shrieking ghoul winds part the morbod whole
    Staggered Ancients guard the secreted swoon
    Silent lids watching below my Funeral Moon.

    ---yes I stole some album titles ;) It's supposed to be about seasonal change/love poem.
     
  19. Lunatic_Asylum

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    Absolutely brilliant, so far the best I've read from that post! You have a talent, please post what you have here, I am and will be grateful.
     
  20. Teh Grimace

    Teh Grimace New Metal Member

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    You can't reference Darkthrone. It's just a bad idea. And especially not more than once in the same song.

    Scythe's has been the best so far, but only because everyone else's has been utter shite, while his was just slightly shite.
     

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