Needing some immediate help on this one

[docwright15]

www.purevolume.com/dustinwright

I recorded this the other day, and I like the song, but there are some tweaks that need to be done. Im not sure what to do though...
any ideas?

its the second one..."take 2"

 

[IBmixin]

vocals sound thin. try sculpting out a bit of guitar to make room for them.. or add a stereo delay with a really low percentage of wet working. just enough that u can hear it get bigger and not a delay, less is more.
sounds like sample towards the middle are all hi fizz, tame that stuff...

over all the instruments sound great but u left no room for vox