Bloodborne Theme Cover advice/feedback wanted

[Cryo114]

I've not been recording for a few years due to work and illness. And this is my somewhat return. I've already identified some issues. Some of the high leads are a bit shrill etc

But I was interested in what you guys thought

 

[TacticalTiger]

Cool arrangement. Mix sounds solid. On a creative note the lead part in the beginning played on a clean channel would have sounded cool.