hey there please listen to this =)

[Seed_of_filth]

this is my song its slightly melodic death metal its guitar only
it sounds like unleashed and hypocrisy but no where as good lol.. i made it into a youtube vid [ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vrYqSf8NkqQ&feature=channel_video_title[/ame] with a pic featuring artwork i put together
and it can also be heard here http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=10754362&q=hi&newref=1
please give it a listen! i have been looking all over the web trying to find metal forums so i can just get heard i hope you all will like my song =)

 

[DestroyAndDominate]

I think the chords sound too light. Perhaps you could make them barred? It will give them a much heavier tone. I think, it needs a serious drum track.

 

[Seed_of_filth]

thanks for the tips..