My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

[innerdream]

Hello everyone

I would be grateful if you would take a listen to one of my songs – Path Of The Chosen – at my soundclick page at the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2361445&q=Hi

Your comments and views are most welcome on all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc)

Cheers

Lyrics
As I look around I’ve left behind the mirror’s saddened eyes
Through this time we ride onwards now forever to our harmony
Far across the sea every path is written in my mind
To the desert sands onwards now forever to our history

We were once so broken
The words have been spoken
The door has been opened
Were walking the path of the chosen

Stars will guide the way right into the heart of every soul
Heroes by my side climbing every mountain as it’s meant to be

There isn’t any other reason
The hope remains for every season

We were once so broken
The words have been spoken
The door has been opened
Were walking the path of the chosen

(©PFM 27/04/2005)

For other InnerDream songs, news, updates etc click on the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/innerdreammusic.htm

 

[innerdream]

does anyone have any thoughts on the song?

 

[triellan666]

yea.... ah i like the guitar work (most of the time) not as heavy as im used to, but theres no drums!! I think thats mostly the reason that it wasent that good, and the singing could be alot more brutal, but hey man if u just get some drums in there youll be on your way

 

[innerdream]

yea.... ah i like the guitar work (most of the time) not as heavy as im used to, but theres no drums!! I think thats mostly the reason that it wasent that good, and the singing could be alot more brutal, but hey man if u just get some drums in there youll be on your way

Thanks for the reply I agree that my voice needs a lot of improvement