Looking for feedback on an original song

[duguy8]

Hey guys! So I have been working on this new song and wanted to have some outside feedback. After hearing it so many times with my own ears it is tough to critic myself haha. I basically did everything in the box, Steven Slate Drums, Sansamp Bass, Guitar DI with amplitube all into Logic Pro. Let me know what I need to work on, thank you!

 

[Imaeda]

Sounds really good, has a very nice Coheed vibe going on which is cool.

 

[duguy8]

Thanks a lot Imaeda!

 

[bryan_kilco]

I'd bring that kick up a few db! And the bass guitar seems a bit loud and poking out in a few spots.

Also - where in PA are you?

 

[duguy8]

Sweet I will try that and see how it sounds. I always have a bit of a struggle finding a good balance between the kick and bass levels.

And Im near Pittsburgh!