Please listen to my recordings...

[Andrew 17]

hey!! if you like, could you please listen to my recordings on soundclick? I'd love to receive some feedback on them!
Here's the link...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/andrewlobbanmusic.htm

There are no words on them because...I can't sing! Lol! But they do have lyrics written. Well...please give me your opinions!
Thank you!!!

 

[Ravaging Dragon]

i'd like to listen to it, but the page doesn't work...

 

[Andrew 17]

i'd like to listen to it, but the page doesn't work...

The page doesn't work? It was working earlier.....why do computers have to be so damn awkward?!

 

[Indiooo]

I'm listening to Dream World...

It's tasty, nice and melodic. The swells are cool, but it gets kind of repetitive. You could play something a little more complex with a different delay, instead of just that slapback. Like that thing YJM does a lot with the swells where he plays over the delay repeats, harmonizing his previous notes. Just an idea.

When the lead comes in, some of those bends are pretty nasty (out of tune) and some decent vibrato would give it a more expressive feel.

Don't get me wrong, I like the general idea. I just think it still needs a lot of work.

Keep it up.

 

[Andrew 17]

I'm listening to Dream World...

It's tasty, nice and melodic. The swells are cool, but it gets kind of repetitive. You could play something a little more complex with a different delay, instead of just that slapback. Like that thing YJM does a lot with the swells where he plays over the delay repeats, harmonizing his previous notes. Just an idea.

When the lead comes in, some of those bends are pretty nasty (out of tune) and some decent vibrato would give it a more expressive feel.

Don't get me wrong, I like the general idea. I just think it still needs a lot of work.

Keep it up.

Oh, you're right - I'm not happy with the playing myself...I'll re-record it all at some point, especially now I have much better equipment.
Still, thanks for your help!!